• nocturne

    by  • November 7, 2007 • Uncategorized • 4 Comments

    hardly four days have passed since
    we stopped trying to save daylight
    and let it sink all too quickly into
    autumn’s mid-afternoon sunsets

    dawn breaks; how can daylight
    be anything but a lost cause?
    then again, darkness falls and
    suffers the night in silence

    I am awake wresting an idea
    who refuses to become a poem
    it was yesterday when I started
    the longer night hasn’t helped

    when I am waked by the first chards
    of daylight against my window
    I will see these words and it will
    dawn on me what I wanted to say



    Blogging since December 2005


    4 Responses to nocturne

    1. November 7, 2007 at 2:04 pm

      Thanks for the words that ring so true for those of us who write.

    2. November 8, 2007 at 3:50 pm

      Very nice. Feels like writing.

    3. November 8, 2007 at 4:06 pm

      A true writers poem. Excellent post

    4. December 3, 2007 at 2:32 am

      oh, I think this is my favorite yet.

    Leave a Reply